NO CHOICE
Dane stared at the tracks. Ahead could be anything, but he couldn’t go back, Zell had made that very clear. He had no choice if he wanted the money. And he did. He had to move forward.
The path looked clear, but noise echoed from the tunnel ahead. Inside, the key to his freedom. If only he didn’t need the money. Sweat rolled down his brow and his heart pounded. He sucked in a deep breath and moved on.
If only he’d listened to Amy. He’d have a choice.
A loud growl echoed from the cave.
God help me.
This flash fiction piece is inspired by Carrot Ranch
In 99 words (no more, no less) using the phrase “beggars can’t be choosers.” You can play with the words, alter them or interpret them without using the phrase. Give it any slant you want — show what it means or add to its meaning. Go where the prompt leads!
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Powerful piece, Michele. That tunnel means something different for anyone who has faced adversity- love it!
Thanks, Jacquie. We all have something to overcome.
Oooh, very eerie, and very compelling!
Thanks, Mae. I enjoy suspense. You just never know where you might end up.
I really want to know what’s in there.
You know it can’t be good. Thanks, Staci.
Oh, the dark cave we all face when we set out for the unknown knowing we can’t go back. Good one, Michele!
Thanks, Charli. Once a decision has been made, whether good or bad, we must face the unknown.
Excellent, Michele. I loved this.
Thanks, Roberta. The suspense keeps us on our toes. Just imagine what is in that cave.